Lesson 4 of 7

Writing a Thesis Statement

A thesis statement is the one sentence that tells your reader exactly what your essay will argue. It lives at the end of your introduction. A strong thesis is the backbone of a good grade, because everything else in the essay has to support it.

Strong vs weak

  • Weak: The Great Gatsby is about the American Dream. That is just a topic, not an argument.
  • Strong: In The Great Gatsby, Fitzgerald shows that chasing the American Dream destroys the very people who believe in it most. That takes a side and can be proven.
  • Weak: There are many reasons dogs are good pets. Too vague, no real claim.
  • Strong: Dogs make better pets than cats because they build loyalty through training, exercise, and daily routine. Specific and arguable.

Test your thesis

  1. 1Can someone disagree with it? If no one could argue the other side, it is a fact, not a thesis.
  2. 2Does it take a clear position? Make sure you are claiming something, not just naming a topic.
  3. 3Can you back it with three points? If you can list three reasons or pieces of evidence, you have your body paragraphs.

REMEMBER

An arguable thesis is a claim somebody could reasonably push back on. If nobody can argue with it, dig deeper until you have a real take.